2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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This is the simple but informative chart,which explicitly demonstrate education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. As the chart shows,the professional degree have most salaries in 1665,and the less than high school diploma have mix salaries in 451. Evidently,the statistics in the chart point to the fact that the Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.A number of factors may have led to the situation,but the following might be the leading ones.