2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green campus With the development of science and technology，there is more polution in our plant than before which cause more healthy problem in one's body.According to a recent suvey ,about 37.5%people died from disease linked to invironment problem.As a university student ,For strongthen our country ,we must know the inportance of building a green school.Not only for the green plants ,to build a clean invironment for contemporary university students ,we need do something in our mental or aganist to the inpolite behavior.As is known to all, mental pollution harm is far greater than of the body。On the one hand ,We should improve our living environment ,on the other hand， We should make our spirit clean.