2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green campus With the development of science and technology，there is more pollution in our plant than before which cause health problem in one's body.According to a recent survey,about 37.5%people died from disease linked to environment problem.As a university student ,For strengthening our country ,we must know the inportance of building a green school.Not just for the green plants ,to build a cleanenvironment for contemporary university students ,we need do something in our mental or against to the impolite behavior.As is known to all, mental's harm is far greater than of the body。On the one hand ,We should improve our living environment ,on the other hand， We should make our spirit clean.