2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Creating a Green campus With the development of science and technology，there is more pollution in our planet than before which cause health problem in one's body.According to a recent survey,about 37.5%people died from disease linked to environment problem.As a university student ,For strengthening our country ,we must know the inportance of building a green school.Not just for the green plants ,to build a cleanenvironment for contemporary university students ,we need do something in our mental or against to the impolite behavior.As is known to all, mental's harm is far greater than of the body。On the one hand ,We should improve our living environment ,on the other hand， We should make our spirit clean.