2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

　　Nowadays with the rapidly development of technology,more and more people surfing on the web, which has arouse great concentration, especially the students speed too much time on surfing the internet. 　　Weather surfing on the web good for us or do harm to us, opinions vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of the idea that surfing on the web do harm to us, they argue that spending too much time on surfing the internet are the major reason of de decline of students academic work. However, others stand on the deferent ground. They consider it is good for us as we release the pressure from our study by surfing on the web. 　　In my opinion, surfing on web should be both for entertainment and study. As a college student, we should hold a good balance between entertainment and study.