2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；请注意分段。

It is obvious in the table that the salary and unemployment rate has undergone dramatic changes, the education pays increase along with peoples education. For example,the people with high education will earn more than the people with low education, and they are with low unemployment rate, too. In my opinion, the fact revealed by these data is obvious. On the one hand, people with high education means their abilities are higher than those who with low education, as a result they get a higher salary. On the other hand, people with high education know what they would like to do and what they can do well no it. However, the people with low education don't. All in all, we should study hard to broaden our horizons and strengthen our mind so that we can adapt to the society.