小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Tom.He is tall and thin.He has long brown hair.He wears a pair of glasses.Every day,we go to school and go back home together.And he always help me to study English.Him Maths is no good so I always help him to study Maths.We have a hobby.That is reading books.