2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Success is a bridge which provides a platform for two hearts to communicate and get long with.No one can plead ignorance of influence which success exerts on us.If you want to be a successful person,you can follow advice below. First of all,diligent is an access to success,which plays a vital part in the way to success.Apart from diligence,persistence is also an indispensable factor for us to get succeed,for one who is slack can finish the task he own made,let alone make a great success in the future.What's more,a healthy body and a positive attitude also acts as an effective complement to success. Taking what has been mentioned above into consideration,we can naturally arrive at the conclusion:an individual's personality is directly related to success.So,we must attach more importance on the cultivation of our patience and the strength of persistence.Just as the saying goes:Always bear in mind that your own resolution to success is more important than any one thing.