2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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In modern times, computer and man are always together. It is accept that computer is enssantial in man's live. We can do many thing whit the help of computer. And computer with internet makes our live convinent and smart. But on the other hand, computer have many advantages, expesially harmful to children. Chidren are easily andicat in computer. they also will get many bad imformation in computer. Taking all these factoras into consideration,we can naturally come to the conclusion that computer is a double-edged sword. So we should balance the relationship of computer and man.