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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；作者词汇表达不够灵活，但有些单词拼错了；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段。
Dear David smith, I'm a Sales Assistant wanghai.I'm very happy you can buy our product for 100 boxes of T-shirt.now,I want to give you some advice about how to sent it to your company.I think you can sent them in paper boxes.Paper box is a very convenient box,because it's very light .And when other companies trading is also used in carton。It's good.Please rent me soon. yours wanghai
