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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The autumn of visiting note Our visiting cention of jioner.According to the schedule,the touring will include visit the botanical garden and wacth humate and country grouing in the morning.Afternoon we will go to yiheyuan.The time of assemble is at 7pm in 7th Demerber.And we will assemble at the door of school.Please be on time. Note: 1:with lunch for yourself 2:visiter must enter name in student's party before this thriday 3:you call leave your baggage in the left
