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Nowadays,more Chinese students begin to study English.For some of them English is just a subject that depend on the speaking,and spelling is not important.So,many students pay little attention on spelling,which accounts for lacking of English words.With the reform and opening-up policy being more and more precise,our country is try her best to carry up with the world,in all fields.So what our Chinese students needsto do is to learn knowledge by rote,because at present we should use knowledge we have studied to solve the problems we now face.So many students learn it just to pass the examination and can understand what foreigners say.They do not think much of it.To solve this problem,I hold the view that we Chinese students should have a good understanding of foreign languages.We should know that the more we learn,the more we get.We can use ths language to change our life.And our government should take actions to decline the trend of this phenomenon.