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I love my school, where I spent my senior. The buildings of our school is great, some look like the ancient building, and some are modern.Our school is very bwautiful with many greentrees and colorful blooming flowers, which Just like a park. When we go to classroom, we will pass by the path where is picture-like beautiful, we always wonder on there to enjoy the joy convice by the beautiful view.