文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够使用一些不错的从句;请注意分段。
I love my school, where I spent my senior. The buildings of our school is great, some look like the ancient, and some are modern.Our school is very beautiful with many green trees and colorful blooming flowers, which Just like a park. When we go to classroom, we will pass by the path where is picture-like beautiful, we always wonder on there to enjoy the joy convince by the beautiful view.