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From my perspective, the emerging business, tourism does more harm than benefits to the environment. It is not only because tourism appeal to numerous visitors and create plenty of trash left by visitors, which has a bad impact towards our county's environment but because the tourists may cause a lot of noise when they enjoy themselves, which destroy the peace of the local environment. It is known to us all that no photos no sightseeing and this phenomenon is much common when people are visiting some splendid attraction or extraordinary spots. But there must be some "excited" visitors making a mark or writing down something on the wall or floor of the structure, which has influenced the natural environment of the country. Although the behavior mentioned above is banned by the Central Government, it can be easily found around China. What's worse, the life style of the local people may be disturbed by the constant stream of visitors. For instance, Xizang,one of the most peaceful and holiest city in China, has changed a lot during the last decade just because a number of tourists coming from all over the globe to have a glimpse of the magnificent Potala Palace, Jokhang Temple, Barkhor Street so that the peaceful environment of Tibetans are disrupted. Therefore, the seemingly booming business of tourism bring not only the big change in our natural environment but the dreary influence in our living environment.
