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2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:48浏览次数:1840
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 100 words ,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below. 
  假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Dear headmaster, I had been university for over a year,and now,I have to write this letter for you which is concern the situation about the Canteen Service on Campus. On the one hand,there is no denying the fact that the canteen on campus bring a large convenience for our students,for its reassuring cooking and Convenient geographic location. But on the other hand,the canteen's meal not only bad but expensive.And sometimes we must line for a long time but finally we get nothing to eat. Moreover,the customer was also not very fine.I always see someone go leaving the garbage which causing sometimes I can't find the clean desk to enjoy my lunch. But I have to prise the serve of the canteen,they were too friendly and always makes me happy. Yours LiMing

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