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As Teacher's Day is approaching,I want to show my gratitude to all teachers for the reason that not only have they taught me the knowledge in books,but also they make me know we should be selfless. I used to fail catching others in maths because maths is so abstract that I can't never make out of it.Nevertheless,it is my math teacher who leads me to the heaven of math.For instance,she is used to giving an example to explain principles or solve a problem.What's more,she is always willing to deal with the math problems we students put forward and even tutors some of us who fall behind others. When it comes to my opinions on how to repay my teachers,I think the most important is that we need to finish our education with a good grade.Last but not least,it is essential for us to keep in mind that how to get along well with others.