2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of society,more and more companies employ people who have a high degree.According to the way which employer choose their employees.The people who have not degree or have a low degree always have large difficult to find a good job. In the picture,we can see the relation between the degree and the unemployment rate.So a large number of students would like spend more time in getting a high degree.While most of these students would not be a good employee which employer wish. As far as I am concert,I believe that experience is more important than high degree.