初中英语命题作文真题演练(16):阳光体育运动

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请注意分段。

How time flies, the 2013 will be the end, but i'm not getting much in this whole year, because it is far away from my target. So i need to more harder to do everything, until enhance ability of myself. At present, i am following my nice teacher who told me how to learn well English and advise me many things to be careful. Understanding my nice teacher want me to use as more as in English, including speak, listen, write express and so much that all are so useful for my poor English. thanks for my nice teacher would like to help me improve my English gradually.