2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Today in China,more and more students complian that their schools are so bad that they even do not to study there.Why are they so sensitive about this?I think there are a number of factors can be accountable for this phenomenon.First,with the improvement of our life quality,many things are in sales,which can contribute to the pollution of shool.Second,many students drown themselves in computers and they think little of the environment.As we all know,to creat a green campus is not just make a green environment but also creat a good life environment.To solve this problem and creat a green campus,I think we students should pay more attention to the environment and try our best to creat a good environment for oursrlves and others.