2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

全文结构较为严谨；加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；学术词汇比较灵活，但文中拼写错误稍多；请注意分段。

there is no doubt that a strong will is a key guarantee to succeed. those who are in possession of it can achieve great goals.Zhang haidi, a disabled lady,who persistes in equippingg herself with knowledges ,became a mirace for us to imiate.Noly do it benefit to make up for shortage of intelligence but also it help us to conquer all difficulties we meet. As a student, there is no reason for us fail to be a dertermined person.only when we study ingoring any setbacks ,can we be contributed.