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There is no doubt that a strong will is a important guarantee to succeed. Those who are in possession of it can achieve great goals.Zhang haidi, a disabled lady,who persistes in equippingg herself with knowledges ,became a mirace for us to imiate.Noly do it benefit to make up for shortage of intelligence but also it helps us to conquer all difficulties we meet. As a student, there is no reason for us fail to be a dertermined person.Only when we study ingoring any setbacks ,can we be contributed.