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The Benefits of Volunteering Volunteering has been a heated topic throughout the whole world. The views on it vary from person to person, in my eyes, it has the benefits which can affect not your life but others'. First and the most important, with the people increasing prefer to be volunteers due to the fact that it can help those who in need.As we know, we human being need help especially when we are in trouble.You will probably feel warm if you receive somebody's help. What' more, you may gain happiness even other's thanks to you while you are helping them.At that moment, you may more focus on the process that it can improve the value of your own.Such as, not only can you earn some experience like how to communicate with others, but also you can learn how to deal with the emergency.In addiction, perhaps you will affect the person around you,that's mean, those who will join the teams of volunteering.There is no doubt that friends will follow you if you appeal them to volunteer or tell them the interesting things during volunteering. In shout,volunteering not only help you but also others in our daily life,a more practical benefit is that it will make our society harmonious and beautiful.