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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2448
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;有效的运用了一些复杂句。

用户练习作文:

The Benefits of Volunteering Volunteering has been a heated topic throughout the whole world. The views on it vary from person to person, in my eyes, it has the benefits which can affect not your life but others'. First and the most important, with the people increasing prefer to be volunteers due to the fact that it can help those who in need.As we know, we human being need help especially when we are in trouble.You will probably feel warm if you receive somebody's help. What' more, you may gain happiness even other's thanks to you while you are helping them.At that moment, you may more focus on the process that it can improve the value of your own.Such as, not only can you earn some experience like how to communicate with others, but also you can learn how to deal with the emergency.In addiction, perhaps you will affect the person around you,that's mean, those who will join the teams of volunteering.There is no doubt that friends will follow you if you appeal them to volunteer or tell them the interesting things during volunteering. In shout,volunteering not only help you but also others in our daily life,a more practical benefit is that it will make our society harmonious and beautiful.

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