建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;连词使用偏少。
Many student today seldom pays much attention to spelling in their English writing. som very common mistake even affect the meaning. the reason for misspelling is simple.many student think that small thing does matter and spelling seem to be a small thing.with this view of life,a general attitude of laziness I think spelling competitions could be a fun way to change this situation ,but more effective approches is also necessary.English teachers should point out spelling errors to remind student.