文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
I have a good friend.Her name is Fangfang.She is eight old and in the class two grade one.She is tall and thin.She is good at studying.So,I always learn from her.We two often playing game together.Sometime I go to her family for dinner,and so do her.We always help each other.I thank the Lord for giving me such a good friend.