2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。

With the development of science and information technology,computer are frequently used as a tool by people today.However people become more reliant to computer as if computers has become the host of man.When people meet any problems they will find solutions on the Internet instantly.Gradually they has become the slave of computer.Pondering on things seems to be a difficult thing. As far as i am concerned,men are the conquerors of the world and computer is invented by human beings.They are only regarded as the tool of us but the host or even everthing.we should retreat this exactly.Only if this can we become better and excellent.