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Be careful with money In our daily life,we can live without food,water,cloth,shoes and other necessary things.And those things can cost money.In other words,we cannot live without money.We should work hard to earn money and we should learn to save money,especially for us students.So it is necessary to save money in our daily life. Most of the students in our University are careful with their money in daily life.For me, I collect all kinds of coupons,look for group-buy deals in the internet if we eat out or travel someplace.I don't buy clothes unless in a sale.I live in teenagers' hotel,so it cannot cost a lot.In this way,I can save a lot of money.What's more,I would like to take a train rather than take a flight if I travel.Because it can save money too.I am happy to do this,because it is very romantic to go to a new place by train.I like this. Absolutely,I can save a lot of money in my way.So I don't think all this may not make us smart consumers.It is a smarter way in stead.
