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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;请注意分段。

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Who will be my co-workers? What do they look like? Are they easy to go on? These questions, I think, everyone who is going to start a new work with strange co-workers will raise. As for me, no matter who they are, whether they have a good-looking, my co-workers should have the following characteristics. To begin with, honest. Even though telling truth is increasing doubt by many in today's world, it is the traditional virtue that we value greatly and the cornerstone people communicate with each other. If there is a co-worker always lie to us, which will definitely tear the trust among employers. Even if she or he tells the truth to us sometime, we still choose to ignore the fact based on her or his daily behavioral. These absolutely will engender adverse effect to the whole company, which, in turn, negatively affects other employees' welfare. Thus, the significance of honest cannot be overstated. Further, team spirit. Employers’ team spirit is the guarantee of team's success. We are living in an era of information explosive, everyone is skilled at only one or two filed rather than all realms; Thus, collaboration among employers becomes the most contribute factor to achieve the goal. Also, as a member, you can enjoy all the benefits of membership, from sharing experience to a sense of belonging and so on. But you also have the obligation to share your insights and lessons with team members. In fact, only through the mutual commitment, sharing, understanding among team members, can have more opportunity a team to success. Finally, action and tenacity. Putting something into practice is always difficult than the theory. In other words, trust and team spirit are only the Therefore, honest, team spirit, action and spirit are the basic characteristics that my co-workers should have. I anticipate to collaborate with them and put our dream into action.

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