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Aiming at broadening citizens' horizon and providing more relaxing places to the public,an increasing number of museums have freed their admission.There is no doubt that government has launched such policy under the request of citizens for the reason that the entrance tickets are always too expensive for them to afford. However,every coin has two sides.As everyone is allowed to enter the museum,it will be absolutely more difficult to maintain the order.For instance,not only will the rubbish abandoned in the museum rise rapidly,but also the cultural artefacts will be under the great risk of destroying. whe it comes to my opinions on this policy,I totally support it because it will be of great benefit to improving the quality of people.Nevertheless,we should take every effort to deal with the problems that may come up.Last but not least,it is inevitable to define the number and set up the punishment.