上下文衔接稍显不流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
I realize eventually that rememorizing the new word is very difficult for me.But I have no idea on the memory problem.I dout it is the cause of my old age or poor foundtion.Who can answer me? Though it is difficult,I can't give up because I think that insisting what I am doing can gain what I want.