小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.she is a Chines,have two kils,one boy one gril.sometime she like sopping and like eat some good food.like me,me too.so,we're alwys tergeter going to school TAFEsa find some things passed time and tegeter eat form house lunch boss.afternoon,our worked going each house.But,every day our often coll pohon teking.