Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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what do you suppose the relationship between Education and higher pays or lower unemployment? Viewpoint differs from different person, however,a current population survey from Bureau of Labor statistics, which shows us that the good education dedicated to higher education and lower, results a heated discussion. I don't agree with that point,it's common that many educated further people cannot find a job or can find a unsuitable work, while the uneducated or no receiving such good education find a fine job. what's the reason for that? I think the market is the key cause for that. Some hot subject attracted too many people, but the market cannot provide so many position for that, that is the market is saturated. whereas the uneducated or just primarily get a good job for that country needs different types of technical workers to develop the country and they didn't have too high expectation for the wage. In a word. it's important to choose a good major before enter into the university and follow your interests.