小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达多样性要加强，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yes! I will be make termorrn food for my husband and sun.Terday,I was bought Some meet,bake,Eggs and oil ,But I for get bought a pink milk for my girl.Terday my hasband no ervy happy.Bucuns in the his work to much tins to do.Busy for his bobys,he fins terrnd.Yesterday,Our filmeny was wanch move,He is happed.