过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;请注意分段。
In recennt years,there is an advent that,many students pay less attention on the study of Chinese,even igoring the major subject. To begin with,the main reason for the phenomenon is that Chinese seems no use or has no direct association to students future,especially to their careers.Consequently,the world will be ended up with the abandoned Chinese culture. In my humble opinion,due attention is supposed to be given to the study of Chinese.In fact,it is a convenient tool to express our thoughts and feelings as well as communicate with others.Moreover,for the five thousdand history of China,Chinese is not only a simple language,but also the symble of the multi-civilization culture of our motherland.Therefore,we are on duty to inherit Chinese from generation to generation!