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In recent years,there is an advent that,many students pay less attention on the study of Chinese,even ignoring the major subject. To begin with,the main reason for the phenomenon is that Chinese seems no use or has no direct association to students future,especially to their careers.Consequently,the world will end up with the disappearance of Chinese culture. In my humble opinion,adequate attention is supposed to be given to the study of Chinese.In fact,it is a convenient tool to express our thoughts and feelings as well as communicate with others. Moreover,for the five thousand history of China,Chinese is not only a simple language,but also the symbol of the multi-civilization culture of our motherland. Therefore,we are on duty to inherit Chinese from generation to generation!