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Along with the step of globalization, most students' attention has shifted from Chinese to foreign cultures,which brought on great worries among people regarding the development of Chinese culture. There may be several main reasons to account for this phenomenon. First and foremost, the globalization greatly stimulated the spread of foreign cultures, stirring great interest among Chinese students in return; in addition, college students are, to some extent, forced to study certain foreign languages so as to pass exams or find good jobs in the result of no time to study Chinese; on the other hand, schools have no strict demand on students' Chinese standard as well. No doubt, neglecting the study of Chinese will ultimately hold back the expand of Chinese culture, and the Chinese may lose their cultural identity in such a competitive world. In aim of changing this situation, due attention should be given to the study of Chinese. To begin with, government should put great efforts on the growth of Chinese culture to make more people proud of it; besides, colleges and universities should make exams more balanced, not simply emphasizing the importance of foreign languages; finally, schools should also attach great importance to the study of Chinese, making it a compulsory curriculum. Through these efforts, I think, chances of changing this phenomenon are prosperous.
