2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

The common phenomenon are have in many products at society.You can see it in variety products.what reasons lead to this phenomenon? Do you have great ideas ? On the one hand,many customers are not only see quality of products but also pay attention to packing of products. Othe other hand, enterprises look forward to rising price ,so they have no choice but to decorate of products.Besides,high quality can approve people's insprit. There are many approaches to solve this problem.first but foremost,company should devote to improve quality .Secendly,as a customer,we should improve our compensive quality about choosing products. We have to believe that when we buy a product ,we will use it ,not see it .