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The hot issue of relationships between girls and boys in schools is still annoying many parents. And as many students have crush to their classmates, their parents are inclined to send their children to single sex schools. So, do you think that single sex schools are better for students than co-ed schools? Some may appraise it because it can avoid puppy love and makes students focus on study while others definitely object to it. In my opinion, I think co-ed schools are better learning environment for students, no matter physically or psychologically. First, co-ed schools offer opportunities for students who have vague thoughts about another sex students to shape their correct understanding of another sex students. And we have to admit that things will develop in the opposite direction when they become extreme. Thereforce, separating students on their sex is not the best way to deal with the problem. If you take some extreme actions to oppress the puppy love, students may more curious about another sex and turn to the opposite. Second, co-ed schools have better learning environment for students. If the men and women work together, they will not feel tired. That is to say that men and women can make the best use of their own advantages and make up for the deficiency of their own sex under the situation like study, cleaning and so on. In conclusion, co-ed schools are beneficial for both sex students, it will help students to have healthy mind and teach them how to grow up maturely.