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2011年4月2日雅思大作文真题:飞机旅行是否应当廉价

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:37浏览次数:7690
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【题目要求

Many people think cheap air travel should been couraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads toenvironmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion.


【题目翻译】

很多人认为我们应当鼓励廉价的飞机旅行,因为它给了普通人远行的自由。然而,另外一些人则认为这会导致环境问题,因此飞机旅行应当更加昂贵,以便减少人们的使用。谈论双方观点更给出你自己的观点。

【关键词分析】

cheap air travel

本题不是简单的飞机旅行的利与弊,而是问飞机旅行是否应当廉价。

话题分类与题型

本题是旧题,与2008年6月14日的考题完全相同,与2010年4月10日(见下)的考题也几乎一致。属于科技类与环保类的混合话题,题型为Discursive(Argumentation)。值得一提的是,最近考老题的次数较多,上一次考试(2011年3月19日)的考题与2008年11月15日的完全相同,因此提醒各位考生一定要重视对历年考题的复习。有意思的是,今天欧洲考区的话题同样是科技类与环保类的混合题型,同样是2008年的考过的旧题。题目是科技改变农产品产量与质量的利弊(详见本文最后)。

话题评价

环保类写作话题题库中有一个小分支是关于“交通工具”的。从2003年至今,这个分支话题共出现8次,其中2次是问汽车的利弊,6次飞机是否应该被限制(其余4道话题见下)。这些话题的基本思路都是相同的,缺点主要从环保角度去考虑。当然每个话题有不同的侧重点,同学需要认真对待。

类似真题

1.   Some people think the recent increase in cheap airtravel brings benefits, while other people think it has drawbacksto the environment and the world's resources. Discuss both viewsand give your opinion. (100410)

2.   Some people believe that air travel should berestricted because it causes seriouspollutionand uses up the world’s fuel resources. To whatextent do you agree or disagree? (060218)

3.   One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a caruses in several years’ time, but theycausethe same amount of pollution. So some people thinkthat we should discouragenon-essential flights, such as tourist travel,rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extentdo you agree or disagree? (060325,080405)

【结构与思路】

本文属于Discuss both views and give youropinion题型,因此双方的观点必须都提及,缺一不可。但是结论上未必要折中,如果要支持一方的话,则选择驳斥另外一方即可。 

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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Flying to the sky has long been a dream haunted generations of human kind, and the 20 century witnessed this dream coming true. Since then air travel has been among the fastest and hottest means of transportation. Airplanes dramatically shorten the distances and afford us to travel further. Therefore many people hold the opinion that cheap air travel should be encouraged to enable ordinary people to expand their horizon. However, taken the high energy consuming rate and the environmental pollution of the airplane into consideration, many oppose to the idea that air travel should be accessible to ordinary people. I hold the position that cheap air travel should not be encouraged. First and foremost, we're fighting a fierce war to solve the problem of pollution and preserve energy resources. Various green energies are being developed while a lot of energy consuming industries has been closed down. Global warming has changed everyone's life while air pollution tops the list of people's concern for health threat. Under such circumstances, air travel should not be encouraged. Second, our country has provided us with a convenient rail transmit system with which we can travel to far away in a short time with a cheap price. Many of the cities in China have been equipped with high-speed rails. Few procedure s need to be handled if you choose the railway transportation. Cheap air travel should not be encouraged, but new energy sources for airplanes should be developed and utilized to mitigate the pollution. Rail transmit is also a good and affordable means to travel.

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