2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

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Name is important in all our life. When we are born in this word,we got our name from our parents.During the school,name is our code.Teachers distinguish us from different names or arrange us special tasks.On exercise books,we write our name.All the notes in it standing for our thoughts and ideas.