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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
how to become a smart consumer with the growth of living standard,the level of consumption has been improved a lot.however,in recently there is a hot debate that how to be a smart consumer.some people think that as students,are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. in my opinion i totally agree with those behaviors. at first , as college students we have not enough money to buy some extravagant articles.we should buy some clothes when they are in a sale,which can save a lots of money.secondly collecting all kinds of coupons can also help us save much money,in this we not only can we enjoy delicious food but can also save money. all in all ,as a college student,we should make a plan to spend our money,only in this we can we make good use of money,and make waste in a minimum.
