2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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perhaps somgone may tihink that it is not necessary to learn how to communicate with others,but i don't think so. And the following is my opinions. fitst,there is nobody can do everything,for example,you are an housewife ,although all of the housework belong to you ,but if you indeed do youself while donnot communicate with you husbang, then you husbang may not enderstand you so that you feel sad.