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College years have prepared you for your future life Now,more and more people try their best to get into the college.They think that college is the best place to learn something and know something.Some of them come from countryside with the deep hope from their parents and some even their all countryside.And also there are more and more colleges appeared at recent times.People can choose the major they like. In fact,college is just like a small society.People can get some knowledge of the real word.As for the community of the students,people can deal things by themselves.They can face and solve the problems.They can also learn how to deal the realtionship between the leaders.College is a small place.The real word need more experiences for us to challenge. We also can learn the knowledge about our major.As we all know,the major knowledge is the most important weapen to face the real word and the all kinds of problems.If we don't have knowledge in our mind,it is useless for us to have some try.If we want to have a good job,we should learn more. In college,we have no other choice but to face kinds of people.We need to pick out some of them to be friends.In the dormitory,we need to be polite and kind.But it doesn't means that we should stand all the prblems.We all from west and east.So we must have confilcts on some parts.Just remind this,be polite,be kind,be strong.It is enough. All in all,college is a good place to study and relax.It is very lucky that we can get the chance to get into the college.We should charish this opportunity.We can learn more from the usual life than books.
