2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays, man cannot live without computer to some extent. For one thing, man work efficient with computer. For another thing, man master many useful information online. Since computer is more and more popular, almost each family hold a computer. Computer is benefitial a lot to man, people can search news, information online and so on. They also can learn many new thing online. computer offer people convientence. While everything has two sides, so does computer. computer is harmful to people if people play so much time on it. All in all, computer is a doule-sword, we should use it suitable.