小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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hello! I have a friend Her name was Louise，she is a nice girl.She is my good friend and we often play with each other. She is 13 years old. We're the same age. She likes drawing. I like drawing, too.She has a black long hair, big black eyes, this is her characteristics, she seem to be very small, in the crowd。 She changed, but he still is my good friend！！ louisa