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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
How about your daily life? Especially who live in large cities for many years. In fact the most of you have been boring with your city life. What make us feel unsatisfied? Pollution of air,water,food and so on have been influence us everyday, our healthy are in dangers, more and more people have been illness, meanwhile we have to work harder due to the cruel business competition, deep stress and no time to relax. How can we deal with this problem? Improving the technologies of sciences and planting more trees and grasses due to reduce pollution around us. We should participate in outer exercises regularly to improve our healthy, and learn to release pressure by yourselves. Everyone hope their life would better and better, please try your best to do everything to improve our life, everyone has the responsibility to solve the problems and everyone is eligible to supervise the others.
