c)你的建议。
简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Although the internet can bring us advantages, it always is a curse. First, the Internet brings us confidence. People can acquire knowledge from the Internet: students may find information through it.Also,people can get news easily and they can connect with the world.The Internet makes people a better life. However, there are some people addict in the Internet. Internet addiction affects their lives.First, they lost communication with other people as they just surf the internet.Second, it will affect their study. In my opinion, person who addict in the Internet should consult a doctor or a social worker.They may develop other hobbies. They shold face the question and take action immedily.