2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Now days, many country pay more and more attention to the education.21th centry's devoplement is relay on the knowleged.Only the people have the high education,the country will be moere and more stronger. As it,we need pay higher money of our education.So some of people do not expess the money that they rather than have low education.The Bureau of Labor Statistics,Current Population Survey have showed that less than high school diploma is 14.1% in the Unemployment rare in 2011.