拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
Today in China,more and more museums are free of charge to visit.Some of us may recommend that it is not a good approach to run our museums and we should break this regulation.However,many would argue that the reform can contribute to our learning of national culture.There are some problems that may related to it.First,we Chinese may think little of the quality of museums and then they may even prefer to play computers rather than pay a visit to museums to scan some things that they can not make a good command of. Every coin has two sides.it has more strengths than weakness.culture is the criterion of us.In this way we can absorb more knowledge and have a good commend of our country.