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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。
In my opinion, the best to save money is to earn money in weekend. With the internet shopping development, we have many methods to save money, such as collect all kinds of coupons and look for group-buy deals for eating and entertainment etc. Specially, some one will not buy the clothes and shoes unless, these are good methods during students life. As we know, we could not make money as salors as we are students, H/ever, we have four Saturdays and Sundays in One month. We could find a part-job during weekends, like most students do, as a time-worker in KFC and Supermarket, which most students could choice. In other words, if your speicialization is english, Japan, Franch or technology major, you could apply the part job for the concern company, For example, the most popular major is english, you could teach the children, and middle students for english teaching organization etc.. In one words, the money should be saved as much as we can and students could learn to make money with their own skills.